very nice indeed. How do you ventilate the room? it seems that the huge glass may brake while trying to be put in place. The skylight you have in th other room will condensate and the floor will be all wet...
I understand that this might be for a school project. You can try to pursuit one image that you think that represents the idea of the project, but that image must be a enjoyable living space. Architecture is not just image, it's everything.
you are right. itīs my first project to college. itīs a concept image for the house. the skylight is not in the real design, and the windows is more like this: [link] . but i know it have a lot of failures, i will try to solve this year in my next projects . thank you very much for the critics
yes, this one is more "real" the problem is getting attached to a "perfect" image that cannot be done in reality. reality is much more complex and interesting. - see Peter Zumthor works and read his books and the one from Juhani Pallasmaa